- April 27th, 2016, 3:51 pm
#10338
I'm not, It's called constructive criticism. Putting him down would be insulting him for being shitty at english. Writers share this kind of criticism constantly. Go to FIMfiction, look up an account named "SPNgoatman" Look at the comments on the story "Bending Over Backwards" That account belongs to me. Do you think I got so good a writing over night and from honeyed words? No. My first story was absolute shit. No grammar control, bad punctuation, the plot was pathetic. Sure I moped but I moved on and now I write novels. Have not published any, still need to get them edited as my own writing lacks some of the punctuation needed to flow good, even some of my spelling can be off. Don't talk to me about being rude. I deleted that story because some people got together and actively tried to make me feel bad for my terrible first story. That story got added to multiple groups with the soul purpose of putting stories down "NO ORIGINALITY BRIGADE" "Temple of OGAWDNO" Shit like that. Even the group "Shitty stories that should not be read. WARNING ENTER SHIT VAULT AT OWN RISK!" I know what fucking rudeness is bro. That was criticism. Now sure I might have worded it different if I had known his first language was English, but all languages have punctuation in them. I lived in Germany for 3 years, I learned how they punctuate and spell, I learned their language rules. Same with Ireland and part of England, the rules there are different. My own Punctuation can be bad because I have two languages aside from English swirling in my head, so if I had known he was learning English, I would have worded that criticism with a bit more sugar. Now, sorry to have offended you without doing anything, but let me reach out to fix it. If you want some tips on grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure when writing in English, PM me. I'm not normally so forward but this is a forum and I have few friends here, any friends I do have shouldn't have gotten offended by that (Waffle) Now. As this is going to be ignored, I will not write any more. Sorry to have offended anybody. Thank you for reading.
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